Rating: 2.5 of 5 stars
Pages: 304 pages
Published: September 2025
Published: September 2025
The story began strong, but the execution quickly let me down. It was very difficult for me to settle into the narrative because Flournoy uses a non-linear timeline, shifting between characters with no structural set-up. These abrupt transitions often left me disoriented as I read. I spent a large part of the reading trying to figure out where the characters were in time and which character I was following. Perhaps Flournoy used this device to help the reader experience those confusing yet pivotal seasons of adulthood. However, for me, it didn't deepen the emotional impact. Conversely, the structure weakened the story, and the message was lost.
Another challenge for me was the way the characters' voices were written. The women all shared similar tone, so it made it difficult to distinguish one from another until a clarifying detail was presented revealing which character was driving a particular chapter and where I, as the reader, found myself in the journey of their lives and friendships. While this stylistic choice may have been intentional to highlight the friends' (and possibly the readers') shared experiences, it again created confusion and made it harder to connect with each woman as an individual.
I recently watched a virtual author talk featuring Flournoy, and her passion for writing is undeniable and inspiring. I have heard rave reviews about her debut novel, The Turner House. And to be fair, I saw glimpses of her talent in how she captured the elements of womanhood, friendships, and relationships as well as how these evolve as life becomes more complicated. I can see why some readers have connected with this book, and why it has received critical acclaim. My experience may very well be in the minority.
Recommendation: If you enjoy character-driven stories, non-linear structures, and don't mind a reading journey that feels a little disjointed, this may be the book for you. While I didn't fully appreciate this novel, the presented themes of connection and enduring bonds of friendship still resonated.
Recommendation: If you enjoy character-driven stories, non-linear structures, and don't mind a reading journey that feels a little disjointed, this may be the book for you. While I didn't fully appreciate this novel, the presented themes of connection and enduring bonds of friendship still resonated.
Until next time ... Read on!
Regardless of whether I purchase a book, borrow a book, or receive a book in exchange for review, my ultimate goal is to be honest, fair, and constructive. I hope you've found this review helpful.
Regardless of whether I purchase a book, borrow a book, or receive a book in exchange for review, my ultimate goal is to be honest, fair, and constructive. I hope you've found this review helpful.






















